Friday, September 7, 2007

This Floating World . . .

brooklyn autumn--
the station wagon's
license plate: ukiyo e
walking past
in my haiku hat

a man sitting alone
at a greenwich village cafe
the obituaries
autumn chill

© Judy Kamilhor 2007


John McDonald said...

love these

Roswila said...

Nice. Especially the second. I live in NYC, too, and haven't been in Greenwich Village in years. That tanka made me miss it.

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

I really love the second one!

AnnieElf said...

I like the first one and the image of you wearing the haiku hat, looking at the world as you pass, and finding just the right words to convey a brief, concise thought. Both images were crystal clear.

Judy Kamilhor said...

Thanks for the lovely comments