Thursday, October 11, 2007

crisp morning
my breath follows me
to the car

4 comments:

Pearl said...

lovely observation. :)

Roswila said...

Yes, really nice moment!

jem said...

Very good. Very real and true. I like it, and yet it made me shiver, knowing its coming to us all soon.

Alan Summers said...

Brrrrrrr... but I like this! ;-)