i like the cleverness in this, it grabbed my attention right away. Then the weight of the statement began to sink in. There's a multitude of responses one might feel as they read it depending on the precise circumstances involved. so my reaction was a kind of a 'Hah!' followed by an 'Ohhhh . . .'
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i like the cleverness in this, it grabbed my attention right away. Then the weight of the statement began to sink in. There's a multitude of responses one might feel as they read it depending on the precise circumstances involved. so my reaction was a kind of a 'Hah!' followed by an 'Ohhhh . . .'
Yes, it provokes a laugh and then a delayed "uh-oh"! Nice 'ku!
very cool beans...
Good economic use of words that gives you lots to react to at the same time.
Oh - very striking. Lots to think about. A clever use of the form.
thanks to all for the comments! Sadly, there is an update:
suddenly autumn --
my daughter's
miscarriage
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